Great voice acting and writing, but I feel that the drawing needs a little improvement or at least more frames. Especially, when he was walking away at the ending.
Great voice acting and writing, but I feel that the drawing needs a little improvement or at least more frames. Especially, when he was walking away at the ending.
Thanks for the tip, I'll keep that in mind. Looking from my other 2 animations, this one was a pretty good improvement. I'm learning new things to try each day, and soon, I'll have premium cartoons out.
Thank you for the review.
The animation was smooth, but the drawing could use some work. Overall, it was pretty good.
Thanks!, And I will work on it
Hello, and welcome to my humble abode. I am just a new face with pretty much no experience, and am going to attempt making some artwork and games in the future. Please, give me some feedback or constructive criticism.
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